I think you have chosen a great topic to write a letter about. I agree that speeding is really dangerous and I can see you have picked the right person to send your letter to. Next time make sure you come see me before you publish your writing so we can look at any spelling errors. Also remember to have a statement about your learning and labels so this is a quality blog post.
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I think you have chosen a great topic to write a letter about. I agree that speeding is really dangerous and I can see you have picked the right person to send your letter to. Next time make sure you come see me before you publish your writing so we can look at any spelling errors. Also remember to have a statement about your learning and labels so this is a quality blog post.
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